revise one of your previously submitted journal entries into a final, polished essay.

Make sure that your essay has a create a clear thesis statement; a compelling introduction, coherent paragraphs, and a strong conclusion. Proofread your essay carefully before you submit!  The final essay draft should be at least two pages in length.

In addition to the final essay, you need to complete the attached Revision Work Sheet and submit along with your essay.  Essays submitted without the worksheet will not be considered

 

 

Revision Work Sheet
 
Title of piece:
 
Describe the revisions that you made to this piece in as much detail as possible and briefly explain why you made each revision.
 
Discuss the ways in which you feel these revisions improve the paper.
 
Discuss the approach that you took in revising this paper. 
 
Talk about what you’ve learned about your own writing as a result of working on a revision of this essay.

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